Content Design
Pace is a goal-tracking exercise app. The app lets users set goals, track progress, rate workouts, and more.
I was tasked with creating an onboarding flow which the user encounters after signup. Onboarding needed to accomplish the following:
I worked on this project alone, focusing on UX writing.
A few days.
First, I tackled the welcome screen. I used this as an opportunity to establish a friendly, welcoming brand voice, and to include a small, delightful branding moment.
Next, I wrote screens to collect height and weight data.
I made sure to approach this screen with empathy. Recording your weight can be negative for some people, so I made sure to explain why we needed this information. It can also be a pain in the butt—if the user hadn’t weighed themself in a while, they would need to interrupt the onboarding process to go find a scale to get on. So I made sure to let them know that their best guess was fine for this purpose by adding the following copy: "An estimate is fine. You can update this later."
I wanted goal setting to feel simple and intuitive. I decided to approach it “Mad libs” style. Users can select their preferred variables to complete the sentence.
The goal uses 10,000 steps daily as a placeholder. This is a common activity goal—particularly amongst people who are new to or restarting their fitness journey. Using a pre-filled goal on the screen decreases mental load, since some users may not have a specific goal in mind besides getting more active or losing weight.
For the location tracking opt-in, I made sure to explain why the app wants access to this info.
Finally, onboarding is complete. The final screen includes a small moment of celebration with the user for getting through it. I also made sure to remind them that they can always go in and change their details in the settings.
You can see a walkthrough of the entire onboarding flow in the gif below.